Hi Charlee here again from St Patrick's school Greymouth
I wanted to tell you all about my weekend, so here it is.
My AWESOME 10th birthday party.
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It all started one morning when I woke up,
being so excited because I was going to have my 10th birthday party at 2 oclock my friends
Tasja ,Bella, Pallas, Harriet & Neve came.
To start off we meet at the top ten holiday park where we played mini golf. We split up into teams. Our captain was my Dad/Tony, on the other team Momo was the captain. I was in my Dad/Tony's team so was Tasja, Bella & Neve, in Momo's team there was my younger sister Billie, Pallas & Harriet.
In my Dad/Tony's team I came 1st yay in Momo's team Momo came 1st.
When we were done we went home to get ready to go out for dinner.
We all got our makeup, hair & nails done, on my real birthday I got gel nails so i did not have to get my nails done😊😊
I got my makeup done, then Georgia needed help with makeup so i did foundation then got my hair done
After that we all got into a pretty dress and went out for dinner to Armadillos.
Me Tasja, Neve & Pallas all got the pasta,
Billie & Harriet got roast chicken with chips,
Bella got mini hot dogs and chips.
Yum we all loved it.
Momo surprised us with a traffic light drink it was so sweet so I did not drink it all.
Then we dropped Bella and Tasja home first Bella then Tasja I went in to Tasja's house and we made a tiktok.
Reflection: That I did good on this and I had fun.
Kia Ora Charlee i'm Milan from Grey Main School. I really liked the way you have put in things that you and your friends done and how you have put in a lot of descriptive language. Maybe next time you do some writing you could use paragraphs but anyway keep up the good work!
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